Task 8

1.- She said the first line(we don't know the name) The guy that has talking was Jansken, Veppers bodyguard.

2.-This guys are trying to catch this girl, they are looking for her.

3.-*fear--negative

     *triumph-possitive

     *worried-negative

     *terrror-negative

4.-She react with fear, she was terrified to heard their voice.

5.-Because she know their name and what their do, also she might know why they are following her.

6.-They are like night-vision glasses, he used it all the time maybe to show off.

7.-She is hide, she is on the backdrop of a theatre.

8.-Because she was been running from this guys, and because now she is standing on a wooden table hide.

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10.-Because they will catch her, they are waiting her to appear.

11.-Because she's injured.

12.- Smoothly , wide rear, multifarious, trouble, similar and called on.

13.-She is wearing a eraser.

14.-They are using earset and oculenses.

15.-In the present because the technology that they are using is not to futuristic.

16.- It make it more mystery, so is more attractive.

17.-The narrator because she seems to be the good guy of the history.

18.-Maybe she is caught.

   

SPEECH:

Dear animals,


  Our farm is facing a new era the era of dictator Napoleon, we have worked for him,fight for him and we are starving for him, he is our leader, but he is not acting like a leader, napoleon is not following our main idea , to make Old Mayor's dream come true, to free this farm.

Napoleon has totally changed Old Mayor's dream and he has made it a new idea of "pigs' power" he has made us think that animals are not good as pigs, that they can watch TV,eat and sleep in beds, when we were hire, without food, without any type of bed , we are tired because we are always working for him , he is not better than Jones was, they are like the same person to me, both kill animals and where alcoholic, or do you not remember that he took boxer and send him to be killed or when he took my puppies and brainwashed their mind.

But we are in time to reverse this problem, we together  are more powerful than Napoleon and his army, we together can take control of the farm, our farm.But to make this possible we have to be all together by the same cause, to really free this farm of bad leaders and make this farm a better place to live, when we can all eat, play and be free.No animal will be better than another animal.we will al be equal, so finally we will reach Old Mayor's dream, the perfect farm.

So animals I am asking you , begging you, we must get together, we must organized a revolution , we have to take Napoleons power and destroy it, no animals must be better than others.

Animal are all equals! let's free this farm together!

words : 301

creative write CORRECTION:

Dear Diary,                                                                                                          18/8/1984

    Today, I was at the flea market in my father´s tent, when I  realized that my father left his tea, so I went looking for him, when I finally found him he was with two men, so I started getting close to him and when I was near enough I told him he left his tea in the tent, in this exact moment, I was close enough to see the men faces , one of them was an old man, but the other one was a pretty good looking young man, he gave me a really good first impression, so much  that I have been  thinking about him all day, I present myself (well really father present my but then I presented myself) and I wish the young boy, Amir was his name, father told me that and also told my he was a story teller so when I present myself I also wish him luck in his writing, But what I really wanted to do in that exact moment where´t wish him luck, my real intention was making him feel like I was interested in him, I tried to make it a little bit easy to him, but with father there it was impossible.

    Before the conversation we went back to the tent, father and he told me Amir is a fool, that he is not a good man for me, because he is an Story teller and is impossible for a writer to support a family, he said he was telling me all that because he saw me looking different Amir, in a different way, not in a friendly one. (he was right, that was the true).


Dear Diary,                                                                                                         28/8/1984

Today I was in my father tent when Amir comes in, he was  a holding a book, one of his own story book . I was fascinated, but father was not really happy with it , he took Amir´s book and he throw it to the trash, he is  always saying Amir  is  not good for me, but I really like him, he is so cute and different, he is not like the other guys. but I really don't know ,father may be right, let see.

Dear Diary,                                                                                                          19/6/1985

It has been one year since I and Amir met each other and I am strongly in love with him, we could surpass the rejection of my father to him, because he was a story teller and that he couldn't maintain a family with that job, but I really not hear father comments about him because Amir and I like each other and the only important think. today is a very important day and that´s why I am writing this diary entry so happy, today Amir ask me to marry him, and obviously I said yes, we will be such a happy family , I want to have so many children. The wedding will be soon as it´s possible, because Amir want´s baba (his father) to be in the wedding and he has been very sick, this last year, so Amir want that his father saw him get married before he died.

Dear Diary,                                                                                                         7/12/1985

Today it was the happiest day in my life, Amir and I finally got married, and we are moving in to a new  department , I have to say that my father is a little bit angry and sad, I can know it because he never really like Amir and he is sad because I am leaving the house so he is loosing his little girl, but he will get used to it. This is a new adventure for me, living with the man I love makes me so happy, today is sure the best day of all my life.

Dear Diary,                                                                                                          21/2/1986

Today is a very dark day for Amir and I , a day that we will never forget, this is really the saddest day I have been into in  my relationship with Amir. Baba died today in the morning, Amir has been crying all day, I feel so bad for him. I try all day to make him happy, but it was impossible. I just want Amir to get better, this week will be difficult for us as a family.

RATIONALE CORRECTION:

The kite runner is a novel written by Khaled Hosseini, it tells the story of Amir, an afghan man  that runs from Afghanistan with his father when he was a boy because the Russian invaded the country and how some moments in his past will change his life, especially his friendship with a Hazzara boy.

This work is linked to the novel because, it tells the story of Amir and Soraya, but in a different perspective , because in the book this story is just tell in an Amir´s perspective and in my work I will be wringing in Soraya's perspective.

My goal in this proyect is to make people know how Soraya  felt in love with Amir, and how she felt about the opinion of his father about that.

I will achieve my goals writing some Diary entries of Soraya when she talks about his felling to Amir, this will be writen in an informal way and it will be directed to Soraya itself, because she wants to remember the thinks that happend to her, but the audience that I really want it to read my work is every body that is interested in knowing more about this relationship, but in another perspective.

words:192

creative write:

Dear Diary,                                                                                                          18/8/1984

    Today I was at the flea market in my father´s tent, when I  realized that my father let his tea, so I went looking for him, when I finally find him he was with to afghan´s men, so I started getting close to him and when i was near enough I told him he left his tea en the tent, in this exactly moment moment I was close enough to see the men faces , one of them was an old man, but the older one was a pretty good looking young men, he gave me a really good first impression, so much so that I have been  thinking about him all day, I presented myself (well really father presented my but then I presented myself) and i wish the young boy, Amir was his name, father told me that and also told my he was a story teller so when i present myself I also wish him luck in his writing, But what I really want to do in that exactly moment where´t wishing him luck, my real propose was making him feel like I was interested in him I tried to make it a little bit easy to him but with father there it was impossible.

    Before the conversation we went back to the tent whit father and he told me Amir is a fool, that he is not a good man for me, because he is and Story teller and is impossible to a writer to support a family, he said he was telling me all that because he saw my looking different Amir in a different way, not in a friend one. (he was right, that was the true).


Dear Diary,                                                                                                         28/8/1984

Today i was in my father tent when Amir come in, he was  a holing a book, one of his own story book . I was fascinated, but father was not really happy with it , he take Amir books and he trow it to the trash, he is  always saying Amir  is  not good for me, but I really like him, he so cute and different, he is not lik the other guys. but I really don't know father may bee right, let see.

Dear Diary,                                                                                                          19/6/1985

It has been one year since I and Amir meet each other and I am strongly in love with him, we could overcame the rejection of my father to him, because he was a story teller and that he couldn't maintain a family with that job, but I really start not hearing father comments about him because Amir and I like each other and the only important think. today is a very important day and that why I am writing this diary entry so happy , today Amir ask me to merry him, and obviously i said yes, we will be such a happy family , I want to have so many children. The wedding will be soon as possible, because Amir want baba (his father) to be in the wedding and he has been very sick this last year, so Amir want that his father saw him get married before he died.

Dear Diary,                                                                                                         7/12/1985

Today it was the happiest day in my life, Amir and I finally get married, and we are moving in to a new  department , I have to said that my father is a little bit angry and sad, I can know it because he never really likes Amir and he is sad because I am leaving the house so hi is loosing his little girl, but he will get used to it. this is a new adventure for me, living whit the man i love make me so happy, today is sure the best day of all my life.

Dear Diary,                                                                                                          21/2/1986

Today is a very dark day for Amir and I , a day that we will never forget, this is really one of the saddest day I have been into in  my relationship with Amir. Baba died today in the morning, Amir has been crying all day, I feel so bad for him. I try all day to make him happy but it was impossible. I just want Amir to get better, this week will be difficult for us as family.

Rationale

RATIONAL:

the kite runner is a novel written by Khaled Hosseini, it tell the story of Amir a afghan men  that run from Afghanistan with his father when he has a boy because the Russian invaded the country and how some moments in his past will change his life, especially his friendship with a Hazzara boy.

Me work is linked to the novel because it tell the story of Amir and Soraya, but in a different perspective , because in the book this story is just tell in Amir´s perspective and in my work I will be wringing in Soraya's perspective.

my goal in my write is to make people know how Soraya fell about this think and how she felt in love with Amir, and how she felt about the opinion of his father about that.

I will achieve my goals writing some Diary entries of Soraya when she talks about his felling to Amir, this will be write in an informal way and it will be directed to Soraya itself, because she want to remember all this thinks, but the audience that i really want it to read my work is every body that is interested in knowing more about this relationship but in another perspective.

words: 207

Activity 1.3 

reluctant : I'm not sure of the I.V.F decision, because I will be holding in my arms a test tube baby and not my son.

eager: I'm disagree with your point of view, the in vitro fertilization is just a modern way to choose the baby sex, and in our case we want a boy

reluctant: I know that the I.V.F is the chance to make sure our baby is going to be a boy, but it is completely unnatural and feel wrong. you know how important is moral to me.

eager: you may be right, but I.V.F is a medical solution to our problem, and we have enough money to afford it.Just think about having a girl and a boy. we will be such a happy family and will not be dealing whit girls problems that are so hard to understand.

reluctan: yeah, I think si, so its decide lets go together to have our little boy.