Friday, November 27, 2015

Task 8

1.- She said the first line(we don't know the name) The guy that has talking was Jansken, Veppers bodyguard.

2.-This guys are trying to catch this girl, they are looking for her.

3.-*fear--negative
     *triumph-possitive
     *worried-negative
     *terrror-negative

4.-She react with fear, she was terrified to heard their voice.

5.-Because she know their name and what their do, also she might know why they are following her.

6.-They are like night-vision glasses, he used it all the time maybe to show off.

7.-She is hide, she is on the backdrop of a theatre.

8.-Because she was been running from this guys, and because now she is standing on a wooden table hide.

9.------

10.-Because they will catch her, they are waiting her to appear.

11.-Because she's injured.

12.- Smoothly , wide rear, multifarious, trouble, similar and called on.

13.-She is wearing a eraser.

14.-They are using earset and oculenses.

15.-In the present because the technology that they are using is not to futuristic.

16.- It make it more mystery, so is more attractive.

17.-The narrator because she seems to be the good guy of the history.

18.-Maybe she is caught.
   

Friday, November 13, 2015

SPEECH:

Dear animals,


  Our farm is facing a new era the era of dictator Napoleon, we have worked for him,fight for him and we are starving for him, he is our leader, but he is not acting like a leader, napoleon is not following our main idea , to make Old Mayor's dream come true, to free this farm.

Napoleon has totally changed Old Mayor's dream and he has made it a new idea of "pigs' power" he has made us think that animals are not good as pigs, that they can watch TV,eat and sleep in beds, when we were hire, without food, without any type of bed , we are tired because we are always working for him , he is not better than Jones was, they are like the same person to me, both kill animals and where alcoholic, or do you not remember that he took boxer and send him to be killed or when he took my puppies and brainwashed their mind.

But we are in time to reverse this problem, we together  are more powerful than Napoleon and his army, we together can take control of the farm, our farm.But to make this possible we have to be all together by the same cause, to really free this farm of bad leaders and make this farm a better place to live, when we can all eat, play and be free.No animal will be better than another animal.we will al be equal, so finally we will reach Old Mayor's dream, the perfect farm.

So animals I am asking you , begging you, we must get together, we must organized a revolution , we have to take Napoleons power and destroy it, no animals must be better than others.

Animal are all equals! let's free this farm together!

words : 301

Sunday, October 18, 2015

creative write CORRECTION:

Dear Diary,                                                                                                          18/8/1984

    Today, I was at the flea market in my father´s tent, when I  realized that my father left his tea, so I went looking for him, when I finally found him he was with two men, so I started getting close to him and when I was near enough I told him he left his tea in the tent, in this exact moment, I was close enough to see the men faces , one of them was an old man, but the other one was a pretty good looking young man, he gave me a really good first impression, so much  that I have been  thinking about him all day, I present myself (well really father present my but then I presented myself) and I wish the young boy, Amir was his name, father told me that and also told my he was a story teller so when I present myself I also wish him luck in his writing, But what I really wanted to do in that exact moment where´t wish him luck, my real intention was making him feel like I was interested in him, I tried to make it a little bit easy to him, but with father there it was impossible.

    Before the conversation we went back to the tent, father and he told me Amir is a fool, that he is not a good man for me, because he is an Story teller and is impossible for a writer to support a family, he said he was telling me all that because he saw me looking different Amir, in a different way, not in a friendly one. (he was right, that was the true).


Dear Diary,                                                                                                         28/8/1984

Today I was in my father tent when Amir comes in, he was  a holding a book, one of his own story book . I was fascinated, but father was not really happy with it , he took Amir´s book and he throw it to the trash, he is  always saying Amir  is  not good for me, but I really like him, he is so cute and different, he is not like the other guys. but I really don't know ,father may be right, let see.

Dear Diary,                                                                                                          19/6/1985

It has been one year since I and Amir met each other and I am strongly in love with him, we could surpass the rejection of my father to him, because he was a story teller and that he couldn't maintain a family with that job, but I really not hear father comments about him because Amir and I like each other and the only important think. today is a very important day and that´s why I am writing this diary entry so happy, today Amir ask me to marry him, and obviously I said yes, we will be such a happy family , I want to have so many children. The wedding will be soon as it´s possible, because Amir want´s baba (his father) to be in the wedding and he has been very sick, this last year, so Amir want that his father saw him get married before he died.

Dear Diary,                                                                                                         7/12/1985

Today it was the happiest day in my life, Amir and I finally got married, and we are moving in to a new  department , I have to say that my father is a little bit angry and sad, I can know it because he never really like Amir and he is sad because I am leaving the house so he is loosing his little girl, but he will get used to it. This is a new adventure for me, living with the man I love makes me so happy, today is sure the best day of all my life.

Dear Diary,                                                                                                          21/2/1986

Today is a very dark day for Amir and I , a day that we will never forget, this is really the saddest day I have been into in  my relationship with Amir. Baba died today in the morning, Amir has been crying all day, I feel so bad for him. I try all day to make him happy, but it was impossible. I just want Amir to get better, this week will be difficult for us as a family.

RATIONALE CORRECTION:

The kite runner is a novel written by Khaled Hosseini, it tells the story of Amir, an afghan man  that runs from Afghanistan with his father when he was a boy because the Russian invaded the country and how some moments in his past will change his life, especially his friendship with a Hazzara boy.

This work is linked to the novel because, it tells the story of Amir and Soraya, but in a different perspective , because in the book this story is just tell in an Amir´s perspective and in my work I will be wringing in Soraya's perspective.

My goal in this proyect is to make people know how Soraya  felt in love with Amir, and how she felt about the opinion of his father about that.

I will achieve my goals writing some Diary entries of Soraya when she talks about his felling to Amir, this will be writen in an informal way and it will be directed to Soraya itself, because she wants to remember the thinks that happend to her, but the audience that I really want it to read my work is every body that is interested in knowing more about this relationship, but in another perspective.

words:192

Wednesday, September 9, 2015

creative write:

Dear Diary,                                                                                                          18/8/1984

    Today I was at the flea market in my father´s tent, when I  realized that my father let his tea, so I went looking for him, when I finally find him he was with to afghan´s men, so I started getting close to him and when i was near enough I told him he left his tea en the tent, in this exactly moment moment I was close enough to see the men faces , one of them was an old man, but the older one was a pretty good looking young men, he gave me a really good first impression, so much so that I have been  thinking about him all day, I presented myself (well really father presented my but then I presented myself) and i wish the young boy, Amir was his name, father told me that and also told my he was a story teller so when i present myself I also wish him luck in his writing, But what I really want to do in that exactly moment where´t wishing him luck, my real propose was making him feel like I was interested in him I tried to make it a little bit easy to him but with father there it was impossible.

    Before the conversation we went back to the tent whit father and he told me Amir is a fool, that he is not a good man for me, because he is and Story teller and is impossible to a writer to support a family, he said he was telling me all that because he saw my looking different Amir in a different way, not in a friend one. (he was right, that was the true).


Dear Diary,                                                                                                         28/8/1984

Today i was in my father tent when Amir come in, he was  a holing a book, one of his own story book . I was fascinated, but father was not really happy with it , he take Amir books and he trow it to the trash, he is  always saying Amir  is  not good for me, but I really like him, he so cute and different, he is not lik the other guys. but I really don't know father may bee right, let see.

Dear Diary,                                                                                                          19/6/1985

It has been one year since I and Amir meet each other and I am strongly in love with him, we could overcame the rejection of my father to him, because he was a story teller and that he couldn't maintain a family with that job, but I really start not hearing father comments about him because Amir and I like each other and the only important think. today is a very important day and that why I am writing this diary entry so happy , today Amir ask me to merry him, and obviously i said yes, we will be such a happy family , I want to have so many children. The wedding will be soon as possible, because Amir want baba (his father) to be in the wedding and he has been very sick this last year, so Amir want that his father saw him get married before he died.

Dear Diary,                                                                                                         7/12/1985

Today it was the happiest day in my life, Amir and I finally get married, and we are moving in to a new  department , I have to said that my father is a little bit angry and sad, I can know it because he never really likes Amir and he is sad because I am leaving the house so hi is loosing his little girl, but he will get used to it. this is a new adventure for me, living whit the man i love make me so happy, today is sure the best day of all my life.

Dear Diary,                                                                                                          21/2/1986

Today is a very dark day for Amir and I , a day that we will never forget, this is really one of the saddest day I have been into in  my relationship with Amir. Baba died today in the morning, Amir has been crying all day, I feel so bad for him. I try all day to make him happy but it was impossible. I just want Amir to get better, this week will be difficult for us as family.

Rationale

RATIONAL:

the kite runner is a novel written by Khaled Hosseini, it tell the story of Amir a afghan men  that run from Afghanistan with his father when he has a boy because the Russian invaded the country and how some moments in his past will change his life, especially his friendship with a Hazzara boy.

Me work is linked to the novel because it tell the story of Amir and Soraya, but in a different perspective , because in the book this story is just tell in Amir´s perspective and in my work I will be wringing in Soraya's perspective.

my goal in my write is to make people know how Soraya fell about this think and how she felt in love with Amir, and how she felt about the opinion of his father about that.

I will achieve my goals writing some Diary entries of Soraya when she talks about his felling to Amir, this will be write in an informal way and it will be directed to Soraya itself, because she want to remember all this thinks, but the audience that i really want it to read my work is every body that is interested in knowing more about this relationship but in another perspective.

words: 207

Saturday, August 15, 2015

Activity 1.3 

reluctant : I'm not sure of the I.V.F decision, because I will be holding in my arms a test tube baby and not my son.

eager: I'm disagree with your point of view, the in vitro fertilization is just a modern way to choose the baby sex, and in our case we want a boy

reluctant: I know that the I.V.F is the chance to make sure our baby is going to be a boy, but it is completely unnatural and feel wrong. you know how important is moral to me.


eager: you may be right, but I.V.F is a medical solution to our problem, and we have enough money to afford it.Just think about having a girl and a boy. we will be such a happy family and will not be dealing whit girls problems that are so hard to understand.

reluctan: yeah, I think si, so its decide lets go together to have our little boy.

Friday, October 24, 2014

letter to a friend

Dear Rolo,                                                                                                            28 February 2014


how are you, well i am not too good because I recently got injured in my practice of waterpolo 



Wednesday, September 3, 2014

global warming


Topic: Global Warming is the most significative envariomental problem facing us.

source 1.-


We are the cause.

We are overloading our atmosphere with carbon dioxide, which traps heat and steadily drives up the planet’s temperature. Where does all this carbon come from? Thefossil fuels we burn for energy — coal, natural gas, and oil — plus the loss of forests due to deforestation, especially in the tropics.

The scientific evidence is clear.

Within the scientific community, there is no debate: An overwhelming majority of climate scientists agree that global warming is happening and that human activity is the primary cause.
This broad consensus — and the extensive scientific evidence that supports it — is often downplayed or distorted by a small but vocal minority of special interests that have a vested interest in delaying action on climate change.
http://www.ucsusa.org/global_warming/

union of concerned scientists

available on 3/9/2014

source 2.-

Today, because of greenhouse gas pollution, the planet is heating up at a much faster rate than ever before and our oceans are becoming more acidic. Temperature rises can appear small, but small increases translate into big changes for the world’s climate and natural environment.

Hotter days, more severe storms, floods, snowfalls, droughts, fire and higher sea levels are expected in the foreseeable future. These changes threaten jobs, agricultural production, water supplies, industries, human lives and, ultimately, the survival of species and entire ecosystems. Scientists predict that a global temperature rise of close to 2°C (above pre-industrial levels) could result in 25% of the Earth’s animals and plants disappearing because they can’t adapt fast enough.

In less than 100 years, average temperatures on Earth have already warmed by 0.74°C1, and by around 1°C in Australia2. The ten warmest years on record have all occurred since 19983.

Scientists attribute recent temperature rises and ocean acidification to human activities like burning coal and oil, and clearing forests. These activities lead to greenhouse gases being released in to the atmosphere at such levels that they exceed natural concentrations and become pollutants.

http://www.wwf.org.au/our_work/people_and_the_environment/global_warming_and_climate_change/

WWF.org

source 3:


Why is global warming a problem?

By Holli RiebeekJuly 6, 2010
The cost and benefits of global warming will vary greatly from area to area. For moderate climate change, the balance can be difficult to assess. But the larger the change in climate, the more negative the consequences will become. Global warming will probably make life harder, not easier, for most people. This is mainly because we have already built enormous infrastructure based on the climate we now have.
People in some temperate zones may benefit from milder winters, more abundant rainfall, and expanding crop production zones. But people in other areas will suffer from increased heat waves, coastal erosion, rising sea level, more erratic rainfall, and droughts.
http://earthobservatory.nasa.gov/blogs/climateqa/why-is-global-warming-a-problem/
 Holli Riebeek
July 6, 2010





Wednesday, August 20, 2014

Visualization of a Poem "south river good" by Bat Juyi


1.- first shot, Higt Angle, wide shot, the forest,the ocean and the flowers

2.- second shot, Dutch angle, long shot a person in the river thinking 

3.- third shot, Dutch angle, long shot person walking trough the river looking the environment surroundings

4.- four shot, Zoom in the person looking at the river extream close up to his eyes and zoom out to a wide shot

Wednesday, August 6, 2014

news script


hello  I am José Tomás Lecourant and welcome to The Mackay School news.Today i would like to inform you about the interhouse challenge that took place last Friday at the school.

was very interesting, the interhouse was about penalties, this year the house captain took the important decision to chose which student would throw the penalty for each category and only 1 goalkeeper to save all the shots , the team to score more goals would win, this time Somerscales house captain took the better decision and with only one miss penalty Somersacles win this 2nd interhouse challenge of the year.

I personalty like this interhouse because they bring all students together for making they house win and it also make student to get more involved in the house competition. 

now let see what student think about this interhouse challenge. 

interview people...



this was only a short review of this interhouse but the competitions just begging no one know who will win the shield.


Friday, August 1, 2014

Penalty interhouse




My piece of news is about the penalty interhouse, it was the second interhouse challenge of the yea.It was last Friday.Robertson,Sutherland and Mackay, culdnt beat the 6 goals from Somerscales that give them the win.

Sources:
A.-http://www.mackay.cl/index.php/nosotros/interhouses/644-second-interhouse-challenge-of-the-year

questions:
  1. What do you thing about this new interhouse event?
  2. Who wil win the shield this year in your opinion, and why?
  3. Would you like to see this event again in the school, and why?


B.-Gaspar Martines(student):

1:-well it pretty fun and interesting to see and is good to implement more interhouses events.
                                         
2.-Somerscales absolutely,because is my house and we have a good team.

 3.-Yes, because they are fun and all the student like it.


C.-Sr.Julio Uribe(professor):

1.-Well i think that is a very good idea and one of the benefits about this intehouses is that they bring student together and is a good time for every body.

 2.-Somerscales, because is my house and have to support it.


 3.-yes i would like couse this is a good activity and and they make student get togheter.


comment about the interhouse:

Diego Pertuzé: It was good but they could be better whit more organisation.

Francisco Goffard: I like it but i will prefer to all students participate.

Juan Cristobal Manriquez: We could do more, they are very good. 


Put together 3 ideas that you would like to include in your own news report:

  1. The school need to do more activity like this.
  2. they are good for the student because they will be more motivated to go to school.
  3. This kind of activity whit more organisation will bring more student to get interested in the interhouses events.

penalesinter11






Thursday, May 15, 2014

1.-  Who was Eva Braun?

1.-  She was a photographer,model ,office assistant and lab assistant on a photograph studio. She was the lover of hitler and for less than 40 hours his wife.

2.- When and where was she born?


2.- Eva Braun was born in 6 February 1912 in the city of Munich. 


3.- When and how did she die?


3.-she die in april 1945 in berlin 


4.- When did she get married to Hitler and in what conditions?


4.-She and his husband travel to Munich got marriage, inside a bunker, and then his own name change to Eva Hitler.


Wednesday, May 14, 2014

letter of protest



48 green street 
viña del mar 
abc123

president Michelle Bachelet
"la moneda"
santiago
june, 20, 2014

Mr minister of transporting

I am writing to protest against the increase of the gas tax in all the country, I know that this increase will became  a reality at the end of the present year, these increase will be about a 20% more that what we were paying.

I am very worried about that there is so many people that was a car but they have to pay for these gas tax, I think that these increase will became a huge problem for this people and theirs families cause they will have to stop using his personal car and star using more public transport or have to stop buying unessential things or save money that could be used for other things to use their cars, which would be a great benefit to the country, but people with cars would be disadvantaged but it would not be a benefit for all, only for people without cars or high class people who would suffer to much.

its important to recognize that these will affect more people than people will be benefit, and that's a point to highlight  cause the state have to do these to help people lives not to make it more difficult.

please do every in your power to stop these tax increase that will affect a huge part of the country, and if you cant there is a large group of people who are already organizing a mass protest in front of "la moneda".

I look forward to your response.

your sincerely,

Jose Tomas Lecourant.

























rally (70-100)

Rally (70-100)

Next may 20, with all the people who are against the 20% tax increase to gasoline.

We will get together at Plaza Italia at 11 o'clock and we will discuss about going to protest at La Moneda or only write letters of protest. We need a massive attendance cause in this rally we will do a votation so all people have the opportunity to give their opinion.

We will be waiting for your participation and remember, every opinion counts!

Monday, March 31, 2014

                  Activity number 1 page 23 

It Was a shiny day in mexico/city of mexico and johnny deep was doing his normal round as a burger seller he was cooking a burger when he notified that at the other side of the street it was a giant bag, he went to see what was in it, and when he saw he surprised because in the bag there was money, a lot of money in total there was 5.000.000$ dollars, he spent all the weekend counting it.

He spent all day asking people if the bag was theirs, but nobody asked or they said that the bag was their but they didn't know how much money was inside so he didn't pass the money to they, he spent one week waiting for someone who asked for the bag but nobody want it.


Finally he realized that no one will come to ask for the bag, he realized if no one comes for the bag the bag will became yours he eas so happy that he goes to the local car store and he do what any person will do, he buy a Lamborghini made of  100% gold whit diamonds incrustations. He was finally happy but he realized he will have to work more to pay de gas for the car.

Wednesday, October 23, 2013

                  The new Allsup School

In the renewed Allsup School the students' roles have changed a lot. Now, the students must come with a celan uniform and with short hair. They can't use their mobile phones in class and they have to bring their homework intime or they will have to stay after school.

The new headteacher, Michael Wilson, has changed a lot about the school making  it moré strict, but with better results. Nos students have more respect and they have better greades, and with these change the school has earned more money and they have improved the buldings.

I think that the changes madre byte the new headteacher are mostly perfect because his school has pasead forma a Badajoz school to a godo school. They only problem for me is the hair,  but is my opinión and the rules are made by him and is his personal decision I can't decided.
_________________________________________________________________________________

                                                                                                                                Febrary,29th, 2013

Yesterday was my lukiest day ever, i found 500.000 pesos! It was amazing, I am very happy but i am confused because I dont know what to do with the money.