creative write:
Dear Diary, 18/8/1984
Today I was at the flea market in my father´s tent, when I realized that my father let his tea, so I went looking for him, when I finally find him he was with to afghan´s men, so I started getting close to him and when i was near enough I told him he left his tea en the tent, in this exactly moment moment I was close enough to see the men faces , one of them was an old man, but the older one was a pretty good looking young men, he gave me a really good first impression, so much so that I have been thinking about him all day, I presented myself (well really father presented my but then I presented myself) and i wish the young boy, Amir was his name, father told me that and also told my he was a story teller so when i present myself I also wish him luck in his writing, But what I really want to do in that exactly moment where´t wishing him luck, my real propose was making him feel like I was interested in him I tried to make it a little bit easy to him but with father there it was impossible.
Before the conversation we went back to the tent whit father and he told me Amir is a fool, that he is not a good man for me, because he is and Story teller and is impossible to a writer to support a family, he said he was telling me all that because he saw my looking different Amir in a different way, not in a friend one. (he was right, that was the true).
Dear Diary, 28/8/1984
Today i was in my father tent when Amir come in, he was a holing a book, one of his own story book . I was fascinated, but father was not really happy with it , he take Amir books and he trow it to the trash, he is always saying Amir is not good for me, but I really like him, he so cute and different, he is not lik the other guys. but I really don't know father may bee right, let see.
Dear Diary, 19/6/1985
It has been one year since I and Amir meet each other and I am strongly in love with him, we could overcame the rejection of my father to him, because he was a story teller and that he couldn't maintain a family with that job, but I really start not hearing father comments about him because Amir and I like each other and the only important think. today is a very important day and that why I am writing this diary entry so happy , today Amir ask me to merry him, and obviously i said yes, we will be such a happy family , I want to have so many children. The wedding will be soon as possible, because Amir want baba (his father) to be in the wedding and he has been very sick this last year, so Amir want that his father saw him get married before he died.
Dear Diary, 7/12/1985
Today it was the happiest day in my life, Amir and I finally get married, and we are moving in to a new department , I have to said that my father is a little bit angry and sad, I can know it because he never really likes Amir and he is sad because I am leaving the house so hi is loosing his little girl, but he will get used to it. this is a new adventure for me, living whit the man i love make me so happy, today is sure the best day of all my life.
Dear Diary, 21/2/1986
Today is a very dark day for Amir and I , a day that we will never forget, this is really one of the saddest day I have been into in my relationship with Amir. Baba died today in the morning, Amir has been crying all day, I feel so bad for him. I try all day to make him happy but it was impossible. I just want Amir to get better, this week will be difficult for us as family.
Wednesday, September 9, 2015
Rationale
RATIONAL:
the kite runner is a novel written by Khaled Hosseini, it tell the story of Amir a afghan men that run from Afghanistan with his father when he has a boy because the Russian invaded the country and how some moments in his past will change his life, especially his friendship with a Hazzara boy.
Me work is linked to the novel because it tell the story of Amir and Soraya, but in a different perspective , because in the book this story is just tell in Amir´s perspective and in my work I will be wringing in Soraya's perspective.
my goal in my write is to make people know how Soraya fell about this think and how she felt in love with Amir, and how she felt about the opinion of his father about that.
I will achieve my goals writing some Diary entries of Soraya when she talks about his felling to Amir, this will be write in an informal way and it will be directed to Soraya itself, because she want to remember all this thinks, but the audience that i really want it to read my work is every body that is interested in knowing more about this relationship but in another perspective.
words: 207
the kite runner is a novel written by Khaled Hosseini, it tell the story of Amir a afghan men that run from Afghanistan with his father when he has a boy because the Russian invaded the country and how some moments in his past will change his life, especially his friendship with a Hazzara boy.
Me work is linked to the novel because it tell the story of Amir and Soraya, but in a different perspective , because in the book this story is just tell in Amir´s perspective and in my work I will be wringing in Soraya's perspective.
my goal in my write is to make people know how Soraya fell about this think and how she felt in love with Amir, and how she felt about the opinion of his father about that.
I will achieve my goals writing some Diary entries of Soraya when she talks about his felling to Amir, this will be write in an informal way and it will be directed to Soraya itself, because she want to remember all this thinks, but the audience that i really want it to read my work is every body that is interested in knowing more about this relationship but in another perspective.
words: 207
Saturday, August 15, 2015
Activity 1.3
reluctant : I'm not sure of the I.V.F decision, because I will be holding in my arms a test tube baby and not my son.
eager: I'm disagree with your point of view, the in vitro fertilization is just a modern way to choose the baby sex, and in our case we want a boy
reluctant: I know that the I.V.F is the chance to make sure our baby is going to be a boy, but it is completely unnatural and feel wrong. you know how important is moral to me.
eager: you may be right, but I.V.F is a medical solution to our problem, and we have enough money to afford it.Just think about having a girl and a boy. we will be such a happy family and will not be dealing whit girls problems that are so hard to understand.
reluctan: yeah, I think si, so its decide lets go together to have our little boy.
Monday, April 20, 2015
Bitstrip
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Friday, October 24, 2014
letter to a friend
Dear Rolo, 28 February 2014
how are you, well i am not too good because I recently got injured in my practice of waterpolo
Wednesday, September 3, 2014
global warming
Topic: Global Warming is the most significative envariomental problem facing us.
source 1.-
We are the cause.
We are overloading our atmosphere with carbon dioxide, which traps heat and steadily drives up the planet’s temperature. Where does all this carbon come from? Thefossil fuels we burn for energy — coal, natural gas, and oil — plus the loss of forests due to deforestation, especially in the tropics.
The scientific evidence is clear.
Within the scientific community, there is no debate: An overwhelming majority of climate scientists agree that global warming is happening and that human activity is the primary cause.
This broad consensus — and the extensive scientific evidence that supports it — is often downplayed or distorted by a small but vocal minority of special interests that have a vested interest in delaying action on climate change.
http://www.ucsusa.org/global_warming/
union of concerned scientists
available on 3/9/2014
union of concerned scientists
available on 3/9/2014
source 2.-
Today, because of greenhouse gas pollution, the planet is heating up at a much faster rate than ever before and our oceans are becoming more acidic. Temperature rises can appear small, but small increases translate into big changes for the world’s climate and natural environment.
Hotter days, more severe storms, floods, snowfalls, droughts, fire and higher sea levels are expected in the foreseeable future. These changes threaten jobs, agricultural production, water supplies, industries, human lives and, ultimately, the survival of species and entire ecosystems. Scientists predict that a global temperature rise of close to 2°C (above pre-industrial levels) could result in 25% of the Earth’s animals and plants disappearing because they can’t adapt fast enough.
In less than 100 years, average temperatures on Earth have already warmed by 0.74°C1, and by around 1°C in Australia2. The ten warmest years on record have all occurred since 19983.
Scientists attribute recent temperature rises and ocean acidification to human activities like burning coal and oil, and clearing forests. These activities lead to greenhouse gases being released in to the atmosphere at such levels that they exceed natural concentrations and become pollutants.
http://www.wwf.org.au/our_work/people_and_the_environment/global_warming_and_climate_change/
WWF.org
source 3:
Today, because of greenhouse gas pollution, the planet is heating up at a much faster rate than ever before and our oceans are becoming more acidic. Temperature rises can appear small, but small increases translate into big changes for the world’s climate and natural environment.
Hotter days, more severe storms, floods, snowfalls, droughts, fire and higher sea levels are expected in the foreseeable future. These changes threaten jobs, agricultural production, water supplies, industries, human lives and, ultimately, the survival of species and entire ecosystems. Scientists predict that a global temperature rise of close to 2°C (above pre-industrial levels) could result in 25% of the Earth’s animals and plants disappearing because they can’t adapt fast enough.
In less than 100 years, average temperatures on Earth have already warmed by 0.74°C1, and by around 1°C in Australia2. The ten warmest years on record have all occurred since 19983.
Scientists attribute recent temperature rises and ocean acidification to human activities like burning coal and oil, and clearing forests. These activities lead to greenhouse gases being released in to the atmosphere at such levels that they exceed natural concentrations and become pollutants.
http://www.wwf.org.au/our_work/people_and_the_environment/global_warming_and_climate_change/
WWF.org
source 3:
Why is global warming a problem?
By Holli RiebeekJuly 6, 2010
The cost and benefits of global warming will vary greatly from area to area. For moderate climate change, the balance can be difficult to assess. But the larger the change in climate, the more negative the consequences will become. Global warming will probably make life harder, not easier, for most people. This is mainly because we have already built enormous infrastructure based on the climate we now have.
People in some temperate zones may benefit from milder winters, more abundant rainfall, and expanding crop production zones. But people in other areas will suffer from increased heat waves, coastal erosion, rising sea level, more erratic rainfall, and droughts.
http://earthobservatory.nasa.gov/blogs/climateqa/why-is-global-warming-a-problem/
Holli Riebeek
July 6, 2010
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