The new Allsup School

In the renewed Allsup School the students' roles have changed a lot. Now, the students must come with a celan uniform and with short hair. They can't use their mobile phones in class and they have to bring their homework intime or they will have to stay after school.

The new headteacher, Michael Wilson, has changed a lot about the school making  it moré strict, but with better results. Nos students have more respect and they have better greades, and with these change the school has earned more money and they have improved the buldings.

I think that the changes madre byte the new headteacher are mostly perfect because his school has pasead forma a Badajoz school to a godo school. They only problem for me is the hair,  but is my opinión and the rules are made by him and is his personal decision I can't decided.
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                                                                                                                                Febrary,29th, 2013

Yesterday was my lukiest day ever, i found 500.000 pesos! It was amazing, I am very happy but i am confused because I dont know what to do with the money.

                          unacceptable foul

Today I was watching a football game and watch one of the most horrible fouls I've ever seen and also the player did not have any punishment.

in the party Barcelona V / S real Madrid and I saw  Sergio Ramos one of the best defenders in the world hit   Lionel Messi in his face with a flying kick trying to stop a possible goal, the foul should have been a direct red card, but the referee very strangely did not see the kick and also gave Messi yellow card for insist that if had been foul.

I think the player and the referee should be suspended and  fifa should view the video and suspend both for a time.

google docs trinity tasks

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12wMBsYfYTxGN95wW1c-rz5zIShufoStlgL2PDPv9PnM/edit?usp=sharing !

to: rolorolo19@hotmail.com

subject: amazing swimming competition!

Hi Tom, how are you?

I send you this e-mail because to you because I want you to know that in three day it will be a swimming championship and I will participate. Its a free style competition in 50 meters, the winner will meet Michael phelps, if you don't know him , he is the best swimmer of the world. I think i will win because i was practicing all day in my pool, I think i can won.

bye wish me luck :D

frutillar a amazing place!

last year i went whit my school to the south, we visited a lot of different places but the best was frutillar we went there in our 4 day, it was a amazing and beautiful place whit a lot of interesting places to go,There I met a man who worked in the German museum. He was 102 years. Obviously I met a lot of different people, but he was the most amazing.

I think i will visit this place again because it so interesting and I don't have see all the best attractions, i think that is one of the best places in the world.

how to plan a perfect party

today we will explain how to plan a party first you have to invite a lot of persons and ask him to bring snacks and coke, second if this party is in your home you have to buy a good music system and you have to you choose a good dance music because if the party doesn’t have good music, everybody will get bored.

Most of the parties fail because they don't follow these steps. These steps are 100% real. If you do this, you will have the best party ever!

well this is all remember, follow this steps and your parti will be amazing.

    my common mistake and glossary

José Tomás Lecourant:

1.-mistake: there i met a man who work in de germany museum he work there and he was 102 years, obeusly i knew a lot a diferent persons.

correction:There I met a man who worked in the German museum. He was 102 years. Obviously I met a lot of different people.

explanation of the grammar rule:

Use of Simple Past

• action in the past taking place once, never or several times
  Example: He visited his parents every weekend.
• actions in the past taking place one after the other
  Example: He came in, took off his coat and sat down.
• action in the past taking place in the middle of another action
  Example: When I was having breakfast, the phone suddenly rang.
• if sentences type II (If I talked, …)
  Example: If I had a lot of money, I would share it with you
  http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/simple-past
  Grammar rule :  grammar and past simple .
  example 1.- I went to my friend house every weekend.
  example 2.-  I yesterday I was in my room when my mom suddenly  call me.  
  http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/exercises_list/alle_grammar.htm
  
  
      http://www.agendaweb.org/verbs/past_simple-exercises.html
  
  
  
  
  
  
  2.-MISTAKE: In the 12 of september me and me best friend plana surprise party for our best friend,we do this party because he is one of the best classmates and he diserb this party
  correction:On the 12th of September, my best friend and I planned a surprise party for our best friend. We did this party because he is one of the best classmates and he deserved it..

explanation of the grammar rule:

Past Perfect Progressive Past Perfect Continuous	Past Perfect Progressive	I had been playing football when Susan came.
Past Perfect Past Perfect Simple Simple Past Perfect	Past Perfect	I had played football when Susan came.
Past Progressive Past Continuous	Past Progressive	I was playing football the whole evening.

Grammar rule :  past and grammar

example: we had a lot of fun in the party

example: she deseved that trophie.

http://www.myenglishpages.com/site_php_files/grammar-exercise-simple-past.php

http://www.englishexercises.org/exercise.asp?id=3303

3.-MISTAKE:Most of the partys faild becouse they didnt follow this steps, this step are 100%real if you do thisyou wold have the best party ever!

correction:Most of the parties fail because they don't follow these steps. These steps are 100% real. If you do this, you will have the best party ever!

explanation of the grammar rule:

Simple past : Negative form

To form the negative of a sentence in the Simple Past  you need to use the past form of the auxiliary verb ‘do’ - that is ‘Forming the Negative of the simple past

To form the negative of a sentence in the Simple Past  you need to use the past form of the auxiliary verb ‘do’ - that is ‘did‘ + ‘not‘ + the infinitive of the verb you want to use. For example - I did not play.

We often contract did and not into 

one word - didn’t – for example:

• I didn’t play
• They didn’t play
• She didn’t play

Notice that did and didn’t are invariable – they do not change no matter which pronoun you use.

The Same rule applies for irregular verbs:

Let’s look at leave,come and teach:

• I didn’t leave
• We didn’t come
• He didn’t teach

Here’s an example with the very common irregular verb ‘to go’

• She went to school yesterday.

Becomes in the negative:

• She did not go to school yesterday.

Remember that ‘went’ is the past form of ‘go‘. I went I didn’t go

Regular verbs:

Very simple!

• She talked to Martin last week.
• She did not talk to Martin last wee

Grammar rule : negative past simple

example: he did not talk to her mother last week.

example: she didn´t play fotball

http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/exercises/tenses/simple_past_negation_sentences.htm

http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/simple-past/exercises?05

4.-MISTAKE:Then you choose a good dance music, because if the party have good music all the people get boring.

Then, you choose a good dance music because if the party doesn't have good music, everybody will get bored. 

explanation of the grammar rule:

The simple past tense and the past continuous tense

• We use the simple past tense to show a complete action and the past continuous tense to show an action in progress.

Example: Last night I stepped on a snake and it bit my leg. (simple past - complete actions)
Example: At eleven o'clock last night, I was looking for my car key. (past continuous – action in progress)

• We use the simple past and past continuous tenses together to indicate an action happened while another was in progress.

Example: I was running away from a dog when I knocked an old lady to the ground. (past continuous and simple past tenses – knocked an old lady in the middle of running aways.

Grammar rule:simple past and grammar

 example:  i get bored in langue class

example: he doesn't  want to tell me

http://www.englishpage.com/verbpage/verbs5.htm

http://www.englishpage.com/verbpage/verbs5.htm

5.-MISTAKE: Many food

correction: Much food 

much or many

much: uncountable nouns (milk, marmalade, money, time etc.)
many : countable nouns (bottles of milk, jars of marmalade, dollars, minutes etc.)

Examples:

How much money have you got?
How many dollars have you got?

In informal English these questions are often answered with a lot of/lots of. There is no much difference between the two phrases.

Grammar rule : much or many 

example: i have drink much coke.

example:  i have drink many bottels of milk.

http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/vocabulary/much-many

http://www.better-english.com/easier/much.htm

pages that i  use to this activity:

http://www.myenglishgrammar.com/simple-past-tense.html

http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/inhalt_grammar.htm

http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/grammar/sim_past.htm

http://www.inglestotal.com/simple-past-negative-and-question-form/

                     Best surprise party ever!

On the 12 of september me and my best friend planned a surprise party for our best friend , we did this party because he is one of the best classmates and he deserves this party,  all our classmates needed to bring something to eat or drink, one of these classmates had to invite to her home, obviously there was the party, and when he entered we surprised him. He was happy, this party was until 11 and everybody  brought a gift obviously.

This was  amazing for him and for us ,all my classmates were happy and they said thought  that the party was a good idea, my friend was very happy and surprised.

ISE 1 HOMEWORK SECTION 1-5


Dear Pedro ,  

How are you?, I want you to tell you that some people are creating a new TV show and I think that you are perfect for that job because they are searching  for a presenter, but you will have to practice a lot because it is not so easy to talk facing to so many people, but I think you can do it because you are good talking with people.

I think that the most difficult  part for this job is to not fail doing an interview.

I WISH YOU LUCK, GOODBYE.

J.T.Lecourant.

here is our healthy video : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3JmEr7J478U check it :)

           "elije vivir sano a healthy law"

Now in Chile they are  promoting a new law named "elije vivir sano"  which consists to raise awareness about living in a healthy way.

This program helps with the nutrition that we will have, it can help mothers at the moment when they do the snacks for their children or can help a person at the moment to order some food, because you can ask about what is best to your nutrition only getting in the web page elijevivirsano.cl

but this is not the only way who elije vivir sano help, this law make that all the kiosk at the schools have to remove there unhealty food and change it for one more healthy and make the childrend habits more healthy.

the and another way this law help is in the sport part because this program make one family Marathon every month an ride bike every weekend.

the statistics of this program are amazing because every week more people are starting doing more trainnig and there are eating more healthy.

in my own opinion this program and law it good for the comunity and it will be good for the next generations.

if you want to know more about this program enter here http://www.eligevivirsano.cl/

                                 "Diet nutrition in chile"
Well, the diet nutrition in chile was awful but it is  improving by the law of nutrition for example in mackay :  The diet nutrition in the mackay school was awful because before they sold so much unhealthy food like potato chips and sugary drinks but with the law of the nutrition for children that said that the kiosk in the schools will have to remove all the unhealthy food an change it for health and nutritive food and now the children are more active and they go less to the kiosk to eat because before they went all day long  but now less children go.

But this law does't include the kiosk out of the school. It said in a graphics that before  the children ate 50% of their daily calories in the school but now they eat 55% of their daily calories at the kiosk out of their school or parks.
 

 in chile this will change because the minister of education is trying to remake the law and add the kiosk out of the school to this law with a proyect named "elije vivir sano".

if we compare The nutrition in chile with  the nutrition in America we can see that the chile nutrition is better because in the united stade they are trying to remove the unhealthy food but not in a critical way, but in chile they are removing all unhealthy food oviusly in the united states they are trying to remake all unhealthy food and change some of the condiments an put more healthy condiments and do the food more healthy.

In my opinion the nutrition in chile is getting better but we must improve a lot because it is not the work of the chilean govermanet only  because we also have to change our nutritive habits and with these changes we can be a better and healthy community.
 

here is my young sherlock holmes review :

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HWa8ixMvI3ef0RdzgcHpykpBPGCp7UuwYYyA_Ze9n-k/edit?usp=sharing

here is my sherlock holmes letter:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1INroFLjEzDwMvhLzW-i9PFPCABay3oHTfbnm7P5XnS4/edit?usp=sharing

interview to andrew lane

 Answer the following questions

1.- How did Andrew became hooked on Sherlock Holmes stories?

He became hooked with Sherkick Holmes stories in a Church jumble sale when he bought his first book of Arthur Conan Doyle

2.- Was Sherlock Holmes a real person?

Someones thought that Sherlock Holmes was a real person and other not.

3.- Why has Andrew been criticized by some of Arthur Conan Doyle’s fans?

Because conservatives fans wants Sherlock Holmes to be exactly as Conan Doyle wrote in his books.

Here is my voicethread check it here : https://voicethread.com/?#u3647379.b4338012.i22125135

homework

                         HOMEWORK!!

1. Which one would you choose?

A.-I would like to go to haven.

2. What is it about the holiday that made you choose it? Be specific.

A.-I choose haven because its has a variety of entertainment such as slides and is a good place to be in family.

3. If you could choose one person to go with you, who would it be? why?

A.-I would go with my family and invite a friend, and also spend time with my family and entertain me with my friend.

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