Wednesday, September 9, 2015

creative write:

Dear Diary,                                                                                                          18/8/1984

    Today I was at the flea market in my father´s tent, when I  realized that my father let his tea, so I went looking for him, when I finally find him he was with to afghan´s men, so I started getting close to him and when i was near enough I told him he left his tea en the tent, in this exactly moment moment I was close enough to see the men faces , one of them was an old man, but the older one was a pretty good looking young men, he gave me a really good first impression, so much so that I have been  thinking about him all day, I presented myself (well really father presented my but then I presented myself) and i wish the young boy, Amir was his name, father told me that and also told my he was a story teller so when i present myself I also wish him luck in his writing, But what I really want to do in that exactly moment where´t wishing him luck, my real propose was making him feel like I was interested in him I tried to make it a little bit easy to him but with father there it was impossible.

    Before the conversation we went back to the tent whit father and he told me Amir is a fool, that he is not a good man for me, because he is and Story teller and is impossible to a writer to support a family, he said he was telling me all that because he saw my looking different Amir in a different way, not in a friend one. (he was right, that was the true).


Dear Diary,                                                                                                         28/8/1984

Today i was in my father tent when Amir come in, he was  a holing a book, one of his own story book . I was fascinated, but father was not really happy with it , he take Amir books and he trow it to the trash, he is  always saying Amir  is  not good for me, but I really like him, he so cute and different, he is not lik the other guys. but I really don't know father may bee right, let see.

Dear Diary,                                                                                                          19/6/1985

It has been one year since I and Amir meet each other and I am strongly in love with him, we could overcame the rejection of my father to him, because he was a story teller and that he couldn't maintain a family with that job, but I really start not hearing father comments about him because Amir and I like each other and the only important think. today is a very important day and that why I am writing this diary entry so happy , today Amir ask me to merry him, and obviously i said yes, we will be such a happy family , I want to have so many children. The wedding will be soon as possible, because Amir want baba (his father) to be in the wedding and he has been very sick this last year, so Amir want that his father saw him get married before he died.

Dear Diary,                                                                                                         7/12/1985

Today it was the happiest day in my life, Amir and I finally get married, and we are moving in to a new  department , I have to said that my father is a little bit angry and sad, I can know it because he never really likes Amir and he is sad because I am leaving the house so hi is loosing his little girl, but he will get used to it. this is a new adventure for me, living whit the man i love make me so happy, today is sure the best day of all my life.

Dear Diary,                                                                                                          21/2/1986

Today is a very dark day for Amir and I , a day that we will never forget, this is really one of the saddest day I have been into in  my relationship with Amir. Baba died today in the morning, Amir has been crying all day, I feel so bad for him. I try all day to make him happy but it was impossible. I just want Amir to get better, this week will be difficult for us as family.

Rationale

RATIONAL:

the kite runner is a novel written by Khaled Hosseini, it tell the story of Amir a afghan men  that run from Afghanistan with his father when he has a boy because the Russian invaded the country and how some moments in his past will change his life, especially his friendship with a Hazzara boy.

Me work is linked to the novel because it tell the story of Amir and Soraya, but in a different perspective , because in the book this story is just tell in Amir´s perspective and in my work I will be wringing in Soraya's perspective.

my goal in my write is to make people know how Soraya fell about this think and how she felt in love with Amir, and how she felt about the opinion of his father about that.

I will achieve my goals writing some Diary entries of Soraya when she talks about his felling to Amir, this will be write in an informal way and it will be directed to Soraya itself, because she want to remember all this thinks, but the audience that i really want it to read my work is every body that is interested in knowing more about this relationship but in another perspective.

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